Wednesday, December 5, 2007

Final for English 10H – A proposal for next semester’s project

Next semester, each student will complete a major project. The objective of the project is to show your knowledge, your ability to analyze and synthesize information, and above all your creativity with regard to what we have been studying in class.

Your final for this semester will be a proposal describing what you plan to do for your project. This proposal will have two components:

  1. A written document, outlining what you plan to do
  2. An oral presentation in front of the class (on finals day) describing your plan.

Types of projects

You will create your own assignment, and there are many, many possibilities.

The project can be a traditional research-based essay, a creative adaptation in the form of a screenplay or musical, or maybe you will create a detailed specifications for a proposed theme-restaurant called Indian Island Bar and Grille. There are unlimited ways to show your knowledge and skills. Here are some possibilities below. For any of these, you would need to use one of the books we are reading in class as your source material.


  • Screenplay
  • Stage Play
  • Short film
  • Comic Book or story board
  • Annotated edition of a book we’ve read
  • Audiobook
  • Theme Park Design
  • Web Page
  • Television Series Pitch
    • Sitcom
    • Cop drama
    • Panel discussion
    • Jerry Springer-esque
    • Reality show competition
  • Children’s musical
  • Video game
  • Short Story

These are only a few possibilities. You are certainly welcome to come up with your own format.

IMPORTANT: You are certainly allowed to do your project on something we will be reading next semester, such as The Crucible (a play by Arthur Miller) Chew on This (non-fiction book about the fast food industry or Romeo and Juliet.

How will my proposal be graded?

Written

The written proposal is worth 50 points. At the end of this document is an example of what it might look like.

Your proposal must cover the following:

Objective

Short statement explaining what your project is and what book it is based on.

Checkpoints

Four separate bullet points explaining what you will have accomplished by each checkpoint. Each checkpoint must represent a significant effort on your part.

Final Product

Description of what your project will look like when you turn it in. If it is a written work, what sort of cover will it have? If it is a web page, will you turn in a disk with a few sample pages printed out? If you build a scale model of Dr. Jekyll’s street, how big will it be?

Literary Analysis

Although your work will be highly creative, it must be fundamentally connected to one of our texts. Make it evident in your proposal how your project will show a deeper understanding of the text.

At least half of your grade for the project depends on this category. When creating your proposal, make sure that the work you plan to do depends on the text you’ve chosen.

Research

Your project must be designed in a way that makes it necessary to consult other sources. For instance, if you decide to create a Jekyll and Hyde board game, you will need to research how many board games out there have similar themes. Or, you could research late 19th Century British architecture in order to draw the write types of buildings on your board game.

Format and Professionalism

At each check point, as well as when you turn in the final project, your work must be presented in a professional way. For projects that are pure writing (research paper, screenplay, etc.) all you need is a nice report cover or binding. Anything digital (sound, video clips) should have a printed label and envelop, and attached to a short written document explaining what it is.

Oral Presentation

This is worth 20 points.

You will speak to the class for 8 to 10 minutes about your plan.

Do not read from your written proposal. You may refer to it so you can remember to cover everything, but you will speak extemporaneously.

You only need to talk for about three or four minutes. The rest of the time you will open it up for questions from the students. This should turn into a brief discussion in which the students give you ideas to help you shape your plan.


Example of a written proposal

Biff Student

Bridges Academy

English 10

Project Proposal

Overview

I will write a screenplay version of The Picture of Dorian Gray.

Literary Analysis

This project is appropriate because I will have to understand the book on a deep level in order to write the screenplay. Because movies condense everything down to only a couple hours, a screenplay must use only the most essential parts of the book. Finding those essential parts will require strong literary analysis skills on my part.

Checkpoints

  • Checkpoint 1 – Film Treatment competed. The treatment will describe in narrative form everything that happens in the screenplay. It will also show how I am altering certain elements of the characters and setting to make the movie more accessible to today’s audience. But the essence of Oscar Wilde’s story will be preserved.
  • Checkpoint 2 – I will turn a detailed scene-by-scene outline.
  • Checkpoint 3 – I will turn in the first half of the script
  • Checkpoint 4 – I will turn in the second half of the script. At this point I will ask the teacher to provide notes for my rewrite.
  • FINAL – I will turn in the rewrite of my script.

Research (Due at checkpoint 1)

I will find out how many other film versions of this book have been made. I will find out whether these movies were successes or failures by looking at reviews.

Format

The script will be written in traditional screenplay format.

Monday, November 26, 2007

Guilty or Innocent?


Last week, you all should have completed this worksheet, but I don't everyone has turned it in. We're doing it again today, but with another character. Please do this work on the computer (rather than printing it out). If that presents a problem for you, let me know and we can work around it.

The worksheet is a character study for And Then There Were None, and you should have chosen one character in the book to analyze through significant quotations made by and about that characters.

Choose a second character, but make sure no one else in the class chooses the same person. There are ten main characters in the book and four of you, so even after you all do two characters there should be (wait while I get out my calculator) two unclaimed characters after everyone is done.

Just so we are clear: You are doing the same worksheet two times (though some of you are already done with the first one) -- a different character for each worksheet.

Characters to choose from (remember you need TWO!)
  1. Anthony James Marston
  2. Mrs. Ethel Rogers
  3. General John Gordon Macarthur
  4. Mr. Thomas Rogers
  5. Emily Caroline Brent
  6. Justice Lawrence Wargrave
  7. Dr. Edward George Armstrong
  8. William Henry Blore
  9. Philip Lombard
  10. Vera Elizabeth Claythorne

Wednesday, November 14, 2007

MySpace profile for ATTWN character


Use this worksheet to complete the MySpace-style character assignment.

Be sure to reference page numbers in at least three of your responses on this worksheet.

We will work on this in class today and Friday (11/16) and it is due then.

Block 7 -- Here are the characters you chose for this assignment:
Oliver - Mr. Blore
Austin - Vera Claythorne
Stephen - Justice Wargrave
Daniel - Philip Lombard (?)

Block 4
Maddie - Emily Brent
Elan - Vera Claythorne
Leonore - Mrs. Rogers
Max - Philip Lombard

Thursday, November 1, 2007

The Ag Map


Here is a PDF of the MindManager map we did in Block 7 -- but I would like BOTH blocks 4 and 7 to use this as a resource.

Sunday, October 28, 2007

And Then There Were None reading schedule

On this day

Be finished with this section

…end on this page

# of pages to read for that day

Block 4

Block 7




Friday, 10/26


I

16

15



II

38




III

56


Thursday, 11/1

Friday, 11/2

IV

67

32



V

81


Monday, 11/5

Tuesday, 11/6

VI

96

29



VII

108


Wednesday, 11/7

Thursday, 11/8

VIII

124

28


IX

150


Friday, 11/9

Monday, 11/12

X

163

19


XI

177




XII

190


Tuesday, 11/13

Wednesday, 11/13

XIII

203

40



XIV

220


Thursday, 11/15

Friday, 11/16

XV

236

33



XVI

245




Epilogue 1

259

23

Monday, 11/19

Tuesday, 11/20

Epilogue 2

275

16

Friday, October 26, 2007

Library Field Trip TUESDAY 10/30

Here is Sherry's email, in case you see it here first...

This is a second reminder about our field trip to the LA Public Library downtown next Tuesday, October 30.

  • We need all students at the NoHo Metro Station (NE corner of Lankershim and Chandler) by 8:30 AM. Our train leaves before 9.
  • Pick-up will be at the same location by 3 PM.
  • Barry is making arrangements for those who are participating in the cross country meet at Pierce Tuesday afternoon.
  • Your kids will need $5 (in ones or a five) for the subway, and either a sack lunch or money to buy lunch at Olvera Street. They should also have an LAPL library card.
  • NO LAPTOPS or big backpacks.
  • My cell phone is (818) 430-2254. I should be reachable except between 10-12 when we’re in the library, or when we’re on the subway.
Please let me know by MONDAY if you’re having transportation problems!

Essay Assignment - Agatha Christie research paper

The Prompt

Agatha Christie’s novels have been so popular for so long, she has become an important part of our popular culture.

Using at least three different sources, write an essay describing one area in which Christie’s literary legacy continues to reach audiences.

An “area” can be…

Literary – just reading the books

As a literary figure – Agatha Christia as a historically important person

Biographical – Agatha Christie’s personality and how she is understood (or misunderstood) by others

Film and Television – adaptations of Christie’s work for the big or small screen

Theater – plays written by Christie or plays and musicals adapted from her work

Intro

The first paragraph must be an introduction, containing a hook, a topic sentence and a thesis statement.

Conclusion

The last paragraph must be a conclusion, containing a progressive re-statement of the thesis and summation of the ideas and information you have provided. There can be no new information in the conclusion, but be careful not to sound repetitive either.

Body Paragraphs

Between the first and last paragraph are three body paragraphs.

Each body paragraph must contain a topic sentence, at least three significant pieces of information, at least one commentary and a concluding sentence. In some cases, the commentary can be combined with the concluding sentence.

A piece of information is significant if it connects the reader to your overall thesis. To say that The Mouse-Trap is the world’s longest running play is significant in many ways. But if your overall thesis is an attempt to prove that Christie’s female detectives are quirky self-portraits, then The Mouse-Trap is pretty irrelevant.

Make sure when you are done writing that you check what you’ve written against these requirements.

Due date

The first draft of this essay is due Wednesday, November 7.

Adapted Shaper

Here is the Shaper Worksheet
It is set up for paragraphs that contain three concrete details and one commentary.

Tuesday, October 23, 2007

Agatha Pre-Reading Essay (WORKSHEET)



Here is a worksheet for the Pre-reading essay we will be writing on the author Agatha Christie. This assignment is designed to help you use information from other sources, either by paraphrasing or inserting a partial quote, but still give that source credit.

Block 4 Please Note: Read the instructions carefully. In the example area, I provided two versions for each response, but you only need to do one.

This is due at the end of class on 11/1.

Tuesday, October 16, 2007

Agatha Christie Fact Sheet


This Worksheet (click here) is due by the end of class on Wednesday for Block 7 and before class begins on Tuesday for Block 4.

Block 4
  • Maddie - Body of Work
  • Max - Personal Life
  • Gabe - Literary Legacy
  • Elan - Film and TV Adaptations
  • Leonore - Series (Poirot, Marple, Battle, etc)
  • Jesse - Historical Context
Block 7
  • Oliver - Plays
  • Daniel - Film and TV Adaptations
  • Austin - Body of Work
  • Stephen - Biographies and Dramatic Portrayals
  • Ruby - Personal Life

Thursday, October 4, 2007

Useful Template

The rather talented Austin Bruckner invented a template for essay writing that has been very helpful in his writing, and might help yours as well.

I tend to give out separate worksheets for each paragraph of a multi-paragraph essay, but Austin has found a way to put all the paragraphs in one place while still separating the Concrete Details, Commentaries, Topics, etc.

If you're the type of writer who likes to see the whole structure all at once, this is the template for you. If you you find it easier to do one paragraph at a time, stick with the less overwhelming one-paragraph-at-a-time method.

Click here for Austin's Cool Template

Monday, October 1, 2007

Essay Assignment - Due October 11


Overall

In the 121 years since Robert Louis Stevenson wrote The Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde, the English language has gone through many changes. Some of the words and phrases used in this book have different meanings now than when this book was written, and some seem to have dropped out of usage altogether.

For each word or phrase, the reason for the change may be slightly different, but can you spot any trends?

  • Is it that advances in technology have created so many new words and ideas, causing parts of Stevenson’s vocabulary to become obsolete?
  • Or maybe the values of the society we live in are so different from the world of 1886 that we need different words to express ourselves.
  • On the other hand, you may find that the way we view science – its potential to help and to harm us – has developed in a way that new words have replace old words, or the old words have changed meaning.

The Prompt

Write a mulit-paragraph essay describing the reason for certain changes to our language, using at least four examples. For these examples, use specific words or phrases in the novel that you believe have changed meaning or dropped out of usage.

Requirements

Length

Your essay must be a minimum of four paragraphs.

  • Paragraph One: Introduction
  • Paragraph Two: Body Paragraph with at least two examples (words or phrases from the book)
  • Paragraph Three: Body Paragraph with at least two more examples
  • Paragraph Four: Conclusion

You may write more paragraphs if you wish, but if each of the main four are thorough, you won’t need to.

Formatting

Double line spacing

Use Times font, in the 12 point size

Your name, the name of the assignment and date in the upper right corner

Saving and sending the file

Your first name must be part of the file name, for example, “BobJekyllVocabEssay.doc”

You must save in a format compatible with Microsoft Word, any version from 1993 to present.

When you email the file, your Subject Line must include the words “Jekyll Essay”

Due date: Thursday, October 11

Use your previous work

Because you have already completing a worksheet about the vocabulary from this book and how it has changed over time, a lot of your work is already done.

Look at your ten words and see how many of them appear to have changed for similar reasons.

Do any pairs or words go together particularly well? If so, they should be in the same body paragraph, and your topic for that paragraph will be supported by these two examples. Do the same thing for one more paragraph and you’re set; you’ll have all four examples in place!

Once you have isolated the four vocabulary words (or phrases) you will use and you know what made you group them together, you are ready to write your thesis and introduction.

Friday, September 21, 2007

Vocabulary Worksheet


Please open this worksheet and save it to your hard drive. Include your name in the file name. Like if your name is Biff, call it BiffVocabWorksheet. (Then see about changing your geeky name.)
Block 7: We will work on this in class today and Tuesday. It will be collected on Thursday, 9/27.
Block 4: We will work on this in class Tuesday, 10/2 and it will be due Thursday 10/4 before class starts.

Monday, September 17, 2007

Two Quizzes Coming Up

There will be a quiz on Chapters 8 and 9 of Jekyll & Hyde at on 9/18 for Block 4 and 9/19 for Block 7
There will be a quiz on Chapter 10 of the same book on 9/20 for Block 4 and 9/25 for Block 7

Monday, September 10, 2007

Process Essay Worksheet


Here is the worksheet we used to write the process essay. You can download this and input your answers on computer if you prefer that to handwriting.

Saturday, September 8, 2007

Audio of Ch. 4 "The Carew Murder Case"

Here is an audio file of an actor reading Chapter 4 of The Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde, "The Carew Murder Case." The author's writing style may sometimes come across as archaic and difficult to understand if you are not used to reading 19th Century fiction. Hearing it out loud is sometimes helpful because more meaning is conveyed by the actor's performance.

More chapters will be available on audio soon. You can also copy the files from me in class (I have them on a flash drive) or go to the iTunes story and search for it. For some reason, the entire book is available for FREE on iTunes!

Friday, September 7, 2007

Research Worksheet for Jekyll and Hyde

Here is the Research Worksheet that was handed out on Friday. If you don't have the most recent version of MS Word, use this link instead.

Saturday, September 1, 2007

Full Text of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde

If you can't locate your book, or if the words are too small and you want to print the whole thing out with a bigger font, or if you just like reading on the computer better than the page, click here for a a full-text version of The Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde.

Tuesday, August 28, 2007

Ode to Billie Joe

Here are the lyrics to "Ode to Billie Joe" as well as an MP3 file if you would like to listen to it.

ode to billie joe
by Bobbie Gentry

It was the third of June, another sleepy, dusty Delta day
I was out choppin' cotton and my brother was balin' hay
And at dinner time we stopped and walked back to the house to eat
And Mama hollered out the back door "y'all remember to wipe your feet!"
And then she said "I got some news this mornin' from Choctaw Ridge.
Today Billie Joe MacAllister jumped off the Tallahatchie Bridge."

Papa said to Mama as he passed around the black-eyed peas
"Well, Billie Joe never had a lick of sense, pass the biscuits, please.
There's five more acres in the lower forty that I gotta plow."
And Mama said, "Well, it's a shame about Billie Joe, anyhow."
It seems like nothin' ever comes to no good up on Choctaw Ridge
And now Billie Joe MacAllister's jumped off the Tallahatchie Bridge

Mama said to me "Child, what's happened to your appetite?
Why, I've been cookin' all mornin' and you haven't touched a single bite.
That nice young preacher, Brother Taylor, dropped by today.
Said he'd be pleased to have dinner on Sunday, oh, by the way.
He said he saw a girl that looked a lot like you up on Choctaw Ridge
And she and Billie Joe was throwing somethin' off the Tallahatchie Bridge"

A year has come 'n' gone since we heard the news about Billie Joe
And Brother married Becky Thompson, they bought a store out in Tupelo
There was a virus going 'round, Papa caught it and he died last Spring
And now Mama, she don't seem to wanna do much, much of anything
And me, I spend a lot of time pickin' flowers up on Choctaw Ridge

And drop them into the muddy water off the Tallahatchie Bridge

Monday, August 27, 2007

Descriptive Essay Worksheet

The worksheet to help you write the descriptive essay is available here. This will open the word document and you can simply fill out the worksheet on your computer, then email it to me.

If you are using an older version of MS Word, try this one.